Here's my score;
Story - 6 (some elements were a bit crud, but others weren't)
Plot - 6 (mainly lost points because jumpy at the beginning)
Characters - 7 (extra points have been granted for the characters of Annie and Tom)
Dialogue - 6 (nothing too corny, but nothing too interesting either)
Acting - 8 (points lost due to Jaason Simmonds, everyone else - good)
Jamie Screentime - 9 1/2 (weeee, Jamie Jamie Jamie! *looking hot hot hot*)
Cinematography - 9 (nice atmospheric lighting, good camera angles)
Soundtrack - 8 (good use of non-diegetic and diegetic sound)
Jamie Soundtrack - 9 1/2 (weeee, Jamie Jamie Jamie! *sounding hot hot hot*)
Hahaha, well that was fun.