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Wordplay 
1st-Oct-2010 08:03 pm
Life on Mars (Sam will shoot you dead)
Title: Wordplay
Fandom: Life on Mars
Rating: R
Word Count: 600 words
Notes: Sam/Gene fluff for porntober!
Summary: There have been stolen kisses, snatched touches, but this is more than that and they both know it.




They’ve come to a decision. Actually spoken about it, which surprised Sam when he finally realised that this is what they were talking about. They’re going to take the next step. He and Gene have been closer than friends for a month now. There have been stolen kisses, snatched touches, but this is more than that and they both know it.

Gene licks his thumb and rubs it against Sam’s lower lip, eyes growing perceptively darker as Sam flicks out his tongue. He leans in, half an inch away.

Sam doesn’t close the distance. “You sure you’re up for it, Guv?”

“D’you listen to yourself, Tyler? Maybe you ought to take one of your beloved tape recorders round with you one time, see what you find out about your unfortunate phrasing.”

“Oh, that one was intentional,” Sam says with a smirk that’s part self-mockery and part taunt.

Gene takes the taunt and twists it for his own devices. “How up, exactly, do you want me to be?”

“Newcastle way?”

“I am unfamiliar with that particular route.”

“I’ll show you. It starts with a Lineker kiss.”

“As usual, I have no bleeding idea what you're rabbiting on about, Tyler. You gonna keep prevaricating, or can I stick my tongue down your throat?”

Sam feigns distaste for Gene’s colourful use of the English language. He pushes his lips forward a fraction, pouting suggestively. Gene’s gaze rests on Sam’s mouth, intent.

Finally, Sam speaks. “Okay, done prevaricating. Time for you to show me what a hard man you can be.”

“You’re just full of them today, aren’t you?”

“Yeah. Would you prefer it if I were full of you?”

It’s Gene’s turn to cringe in distaste, his nose crinkling in a way Sam can only think of as endearing.

“How about I stop talking?” Sam asks, voice syrupy and low.

“Would that it were true that you could,” Gene returns, but he cups Sam’s jaw and tilts his head up, laying a surprisingly chaste kiss on his lips.

This won’t do. Sam can take most anything but chaste. He pushes forward insistently, dominates the kiss, makes it all teeth and tongue and possession. He drags one hand up Gene’s back, feeling sinewy muscle that’s quite at odds with how he thinks of Gene. But this is normal. Gene is never exactly what Sam expects. One second calm and reasonable, the next off his rocker. One minute pliant and damn near tender, the next forcing him against the wall, fingers scrabbling under his shirt and vest.

Sam hikes one leg up, cants his hips, wants to get closer, now, quicker. He moans, low in his throat, gripping tight onto Gene as his zip is pulled down. Gasps as Gene tongues his neck.

Are you sure about this?” Sam asks, breathy and needy and wishing he could keep his mouth shut.

Gene looks up with an assessing glint in his eye, the self-assurance Sam has learnt to recognise is nothing like the front he puts on for people who take him at face value, the one that’s all about awareness and acceptance.

“Absolutely,” Gene says, then grips Sam’s cock in a firm and rhythmic hand, and proves it over and over again.

Later, after they’ve both come, but neither are spent, Sam dances his fingers over Gene’s collarbone. He wets his lips and skims them over the expanse of skin before him.

“Give me a second, will you?” Gene commands, soft and slow.

“A second what? Brain? Heart?”

Gene pinches him, narrows his eyes. “Heart,” he says, decisively. “Mine’s been taken. And you don’t have a brain to give.”

Comments 
1st-Oct-2010 10:40 am (UTC)
Aww, that's sweet -- in a Sam/Gene way ♥
1st-Oct-2010 10:47 am (UTC)
They are the CUTEST! :D ♥

Thank you!
1st-Oct-2010 10:52 am (UTC)
N'awww! That was so adorable. My day has been had thanks to you, Loz. ♥
1st-Oct-2010 11:22 am (UTC)
♥ I am really happy this made you happy! Thank you for the comment!
1st-Oct-2010 11:05 am (UTC)
♥ I love the way Gene's determined yet a little shy at the same time.
1st-Oct-2010 11:23 am (UTC)
Gene is always determined (and, very occasionally, a little shy!)

Thank you :D
1st-Oct-2010 01:03 pm (UTC)
I love how full of conversation this is! Seems appropriate, although honestly silent and determined Sam/Gene works just as well... And how cute that they make each other cringe just a little!
1st-Oct-2010 02:57 pm (UTC)
I like talky smut :D

They are SO CUTE, are they not?

Thank you!
1st-Oct-2010 01:28 pm (UTC)
Gene is never exactly what Sam expects.

Oh, how true this is. That's one of the things I really loved about the show, so I'm all gleeful that you have it here.

the self-assurance Sam has learnt to recognise is nothing like the front he puts on for people who take him at face value,

*nods* Yep, this. You have such a way with words!
1st-Oct-2010 02:57 pm (UTC)
:D ♥ Thank you!
1st-Oct-2010 01:42 pm (UTC)
Love the last line. It's far too sweet for Gene, so of course he has to add the insult XD
1st-Oct-2010 02:58 pm (UTC)
I love the power of undercutting. I firmly believe one can get away with a lot as long as they undercut. ♥ Thank you!
1st-Oct-2010 02:09 pm (UTC)
Naww, Sam. And the end line--I beamed. A word *and* a blow, how like Gene. One can hardly be straightforwardly affectionate.
1st-Oct-2010 03:00 pm (UTC)
♥ Yay, thank you. And, yes, I couldn't agree more. There's almost no way Gene's going to be completely earnest in his love, even though he so is.
1st-Oct-2010 03:21 pm (UTC)
You can't see the big smile on my face, but I am grinning like a Cheshire cat right now.

That was perfect. This will carry me through the work day on a little cloud of contentment.

Adored this bit especially:

Are you sure about this?” Sam asks, breathy and needy and wishing he could keep his mouth shut.

Awww... I love it when he can't.

P.S. Love the Sam POV in which it's Gene that's full of surprises and occasionally off his rocker.

Edited at 2010-10-01 03:22 pm (UTC)
3rd-Oct-2010 01:15 am (UTC)
♥ Thank you!
1st-Oct-2010 03:55 pm (UTC)

Oh boys! ♥
3rd-Oct-2010 01:15 am (UTC)
They are so sweet. *snerk* Thank you ♥
1st-Oct-2010 05:28 pm (UTC)
*melt*! You are very naughty with the wordplay and he undercutting and the shying away and the forcing against the wall.

I have the uncomfortable feeling sometimes that you're channeling them, and we're peeking into something that they think is private between them, and I want to look away but can't.

I love how the comments are full of ♥s.

♥♥♥
3rd-Oct-2010 01:16 am (UTC)
Hee, thank you! I love the ♥s too!
1st-Oct-2010 06:29 pm (UTC)
One second calm and reasonable, the next off his rocker. One minute pliant and damn near tender, the next forcing him against the wall, fingers scrabbling under his shirt and vest.

Can I have some of that please round at my place now please? Even though I don't wear a vest? I do have a wall though...

I was already a bit squeeeey when I saw there was a Porntober offering from you, even more squeeey once I'd started reading, totally vocal in a way that would be mildly embarrassing if the husband was here which he's not when it came to the last line. Oh Gene! Head-on crash into fluffdom averted at the last second with a lurching swerve into snark.

Fabby gorgeous opening salvo. Thank you!

Oh and ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥ etc etc
3rd-Oct-2010 01:18 am (UTC)
Thank you! :D ♥ I am so glad you like this!
1st-Oct-2010 10:50 pm (UTC)
Just wonderful. Light hearted, real emotion, and heat running throughout. Thank you ♥.
3rd-Oct-2010 01:18 am (UTC)
Thanks so much! ♥ :D
2nd-Oct-2010 12:45 am (UTC)
ASDFGHJKLDJGBCUEHFKSIEBF!?
3rd-Oct-2010 01:18 am (UTC)
Um, good?
2nd-Oct-2010 11:22 am (UTC)
YES!!!

Thank you ♥.
3rd-Oct-2010 01:19 am (UTC)
Hee, thank you! ♥
2nd-Oct-2010 08:01 pm (UTC)
EEEE! Wonderful!

It's so them and I love how on the surface it's all talk-y and humourour but then you add lines that give it so much more depth. You don't beat us over the head with stuff, you just phrase things so it's layered without being belaboured.

Loved this!
3rd-Oct-2010 01:21 am (UTC)
Thanks so much! Really glad you liked it! :D

I really like having unspoken, alluded to emotion; it's my number one emotional kink. ♥
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